These are scanned copies of feedback gained from group members in class.
This paper was the first of the literature review drafts with a body and introduction. It was really good for me to have that body written as I got great feedback on the mistakes in my writing and the generalizations I made. Secondly, this process of having a written piece of work for the draft greatly aided me because the Professor and classmates were able to see just how the paper would look and where the discussion was going. It was a smart way to tell just what I wanted to talk about and how to clearly do so.
